Question about concrit

Did a bit of fic writing today for the first time in about 10 days (oh writing, how I've missed you!). Was not at all pleased with the results, which more resemble someone's laundry list than they do vampire porn. Shall have to rewrite completely (fortunate it was only half a page) while feeling grumpy about the fact that this story was going so well until going away disrupted the flow.

Naturally, this leads me on to the subject of concrit.

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Question about concrit

Did a bit of fic writing today for the first time in about 10 days (oh writing, how I've missed you!). Was not at all pleased with the results, which more resemble someone's laundry list than they do vampire porn. Shall have to rewrite completely (fortunate it was only half a page) while feeling grumpy about the fact that this story was going so well until going away disrupted the flow.

Naturally, this leads me on to the subject of concrit.

( Read more... )

and for those of you completely uninterested in this (which is apropos of nothing whatsoever on LJ btw), oh look! Cute squirrel icon!

Question about concrit

Did a bit of fic writing today for the first time in about 10 days (oh writing, how I've missed you!). Was not at all pleased with the results, which more resemble someone's laundry list than they do vampire porn. Shall have to rewrite completely (fortunate it was only half a page) while feeling grumpy about the fact that this story was going so well until going away disrupted the flow.

Naturally, this leads me on to the subject of concrit.

( Read more... )

and for those of you completely uninterested in this (which is apropos of nothing whatsoever on LJ btw), oh look! Cute squirrel icon!