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Apr. 8th, 2013
Brief Encounter Redux
Apr. 8th, 2013 05:39 pmOkay, this is a big ask, I know, but I've done all the editing I plan to do on Brief Encounter, and I'm posting the edited version here.
The original version is here, if anyone wants to compare and contrast. If anyone does do so, they'll see that I haven't really changed very much. It's still not my current style. I just want an opinion as to whether I've actually improved it, or not, because I just don't trust my own judgement these days.
When/if anyone has the time.
Setting: Waterloo Station, London, January 1947.
Pairing: Spike/Darla, mention of Spike/Drusilla, Angelus/Darla
Rating: NC17
Author's note: In Why We Fight, Spike had no idea that Angel had a soul, yet when they met again in Sunnydale in School Hard he was suspicious of him right from the start. Someone has to have told him.
Period detail courtesy of my mum. Thanks, Mum. All mistakes are, of course, mine.
Brief Encounter
( Read more... )
The original version is here, if anyone wants to compare and contrast. If anyone does do so, they'll see that I haven't really changed very much. It's still not my current style. I just want an opinion as to whether I've actually improved it, or not, because I just don't trust my own judgement these days.
When/if anyone has the time.
Setting: Waterloo Station, London, January 1947.
Pairing: Spike/Darla, mention of Spike/Drusilla, Angelus/Darla
Rating: NC17
Author's note: In Why We Fight, Spike had no idea that Angel had a soul, yet when they met again in Sunnydale in School Hard he was suspicious of him right from the start. Someone has to have told him.
Period detail courtesy of my mum. Thanks, Mum. All mistakes are, of course, mine.
Brief Encounter
( Read more... )