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Well, it's December. I've uploaded my little Christmas fox icon, and here is the final Calendar Post of 2009, which means it's the last picture from my wonderful [livejournal.com profile] sueworld2003 fanart calendar. Thanks again to [livejournal.com profile] sueworld2003 for creating these beautiful works and to [livejournal.com profile] dwyld without whom not.

Yet again, I've only managed a drabble. I don't think it's any good, but perhaps it sort of goes with the picture - turning of the year and all that - and even if the drabble makes you shudder, you can still enjoy the picture.

Setting: None, as such
Rating: PG-13





You won't see me till it's too late.

I'm hidden among leaves, drowned in ivy – the thing that lurks in dark alleys. The real monster in the bedroom closet.

You won’t hear me till it's too late.

I'm silent as the grave, or loud as glass smashed on wet pavements, the impact of blade in flesh, the blare of police sirens. Either way, you won't hear me coming.

You won't smell me till it's too late.

Not until the scent of blood taints the air. Rich, slippery -like iron filings on the tongue.

I'm death. Gonna give me a kiss?

Date: 2009-12-01 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sueworld2003.livejournal.com
Oh that was excellent! Everything I was tying to convey in my image and then some.

Date: 2009-12-01 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trepkos.livejournal.com
You betcha!

Date: 2009-12-01 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sentine.livejournal.com
If you think it isn't any good, I guess it means I have bad taste ;)

Seriously, it's beautiful.

Try it with JM's deep, low voice in your head and you'll see what I mean :)

Of course, Sue's artwork is incredible.

Date: 2009-12-01 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com
Mmmm, lusciously scary stuff. It needs to be in SpikeVoice as sentine says, and then it works beautifully.

Date: 2009-12-02 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whichclothes.livejournal.com
Well, it does make me shudder, but in a creepy vampire's gonna get me kind of way.

Stunning art, too!

Date: 2009-12-02 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helenkacan.livejournal.com
That was fun. I liked the "You won't" refrain. And the last line was absolute Spikey perfection.

I still wonder if JM misses the multi-faceted character he OWNED for so many years, as there doesn't appear to be a role of similar scope and larger-than-life attributes available.

Date: 2009-12-02 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ex_peasant441
Oh that is brilliant, truly gorgeous, love, to match Sue's gorgeous picture.

(For some reason, I can't see the picture, but fortunately I know which one it is.)

Date: 2009-12-03 02:51 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rahirah
Excellent!

Date: 2009-12-04 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kidcyclone.livejournal.com
The picture is gorgeous and the prose matches it perfectly. And as other people have mentioned, I can just hear it in Spike's voice in my head- a sensual, deadly, self confident purr.

Date: 2009-12-04 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candleanfeather.livejournal.com
Though it's scary I can't help but smile a little because there's un underlying sense of boasting there very much in accord to the pose of Spike in the image (which is gorgeous by the way)and in character in general.

Hopefully we'll have the pleasure to read other calendar posts next year, but of course you need the material to work on.

Date: 2009-12-05 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acacia5.livejournal.com
Oh this is chilling, and prefect for Spike. Love the last line.
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